Did some line edits on the revision last night, on paper. I am hoping to turn the thing in on Friday. I'm sure there's lots more I could do to it, but since all the ideas I have involve massive overhauling rewrites, that will not happen. I addressed the issues in the revision letter, that's what's important. I'm not making great art here.
Also got back comments on my proposal, which I sorely needed as I was so nervous about it I couldn't think straight. They were most excellent comments. I'll work on those after I get the revision of The Moonlight Mistress in.
I'm reading at Philly Fantastic on Friday night.
Happy Mardi Gras!